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I miss you
Every time I see a kiss of a mother
I’ll remember your goodnight kisses and bedtime stories
for I waited all day along.
I miss you
Every time she holds her child in her arms
I’ll remember you
firmly holding my tiny fingers in yours.
I miss you
Every time I burn my fingers learning to cook
Your home cooked food was best on earth
When I tasted not with my hands
but with yours.
I miss you every single day
I’m left on my own
I’ll remember the days
My dreams were your only dreams.
With you in my life,
I had everything I ever wanted.
without you in this world,
There’s no more reason to live
There’s no one to show me the feel of love.
I wish to see you again
Grave is not far away
I’m one step closer to you
With each coming night
You’re not gone till I breathe last
My love for you stands above all
I do not breathe air
I breathe you.
Touching!!
It’s so beautifully written, Jeni!
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Thank you so much.I’m so glad to hear it from you.
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Oh and Congratulations on accomplishing so much on this blog in just a month and a half! Very well deserved!
Keep writing. Stay blessed 🙂
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Thank you so much for all your words.It keeps encouraging me.stay blessed.
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Such a tender and touching poem Jeni!
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Thank you so much mam.I really value your comment.
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Welcome Jeni😊
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So touching Jeni… keep writing 👍… good luck.
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Hey thank you for the photo.I couldn’t find a better one than yours.good luck to you too.
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So beautifully expressed Jeni 😍Being a Mother My heart sank while reading 😶
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Thank you so much.I’m so happy that you felt that way.what more can I ask for?
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Your most welcome 😍 way you go dear.All the best 😍😘
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Thanks again..☺
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😍😘
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A beautiful and a touching piece Jeni.
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Thank you so much.It means a lot to me.
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It’s my pleasure 👍🏼
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Sis ..its so so so touching… Reading this made me to go back into my childhood days..after reading i saw the clock its just 1min passed but made me to feel like a decade.. Ever grown up men/women will love this..
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Thank you jas for sharing your thoughts.you never forget to leave a comment on my work.thank you for that
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Sad yet lovely.. You write beautifully Jeni ❤️
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Oh that’s a huge compliment for me.thank you so much.
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😇
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Wow this was actually a very touching eye opener! in a world we take everything for granted.. Thanks for reminding us to love while it still lasts!
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Thank you for the comment.I’m so glad to hear that.love and be loved💓
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A wonderful poem of remembering a loving mother! Dwight
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Thank you so much:):)
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So so beautiful, Jeni.
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Thank you so much for the beautiful comment😊😊
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Amazingly written. I was so touched and felt as though I was walking alongside the narrator!
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This is the best comment I’ve received so far.remember to spread some smiles when you visit an orphanage next time.they need love more than anything.thank you so much for the comment.😊
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Aww glad to hear that 🙂 of course! Hopefully I’ll be able to volunteer at a charitable organisation this year. Have been wanting to do that for some time haha!
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My best wishes.take care.
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Beautiful..🙂
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Thank you dear.missed hearing from you.I’m glad you’re back.
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😇 that’s so sweet.. thanks Jeni..
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Heartfelt. ..that’s so beautifully expressed dear Jeni ….Nothing can replace mothers unique love …it’s one of best poems I had ever read
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That’s a huge compliment.I don’t know what to say.I’m not sure if I can accept it also.But this one is close to my heart.I’m glad you liked it.
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Should be close to my heart if I had written it 😊…have a nice time
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This is quite a rich piece of writing. I am left very touched and moved by it for I can relate to it in my very own ways quite some. Beautiful ❤
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I’m glad you liked it.this one is close to my heart also.thank you so much
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So touching and full of emotions… loved the last lines…though, somehow, it made me sad…
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Thank you so much.It means a lot.
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Beautiful work ❤ ❤ I hope you have a great and successful year dear 🙂 🙂 x x
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Thank you so much
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Your welcome dear 🙂 🙂 x x
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Loved this one Jeni. It really touched my heart.
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Thank you so much deepika.I’m happy you liked it.It’s good to have you here.I welcome you to my blog
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Thanks for the warm welcome Jeni. Actually, I should thank you fro stopping by at my blog, else I would’ve missed reading and enjoying your writes. You have a way with the pen, keep writing. 🙂
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Thank you.Yeah I will😊
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this is so touching ❤ god bless you!
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Thank you dear.stay blessed
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Love this! Such a touching & meaningful poem! Enjoyed reading this so much – very well written! Keep up the great work! 🙂 🙂
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Thank you so much.
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This is heart-touching!
Loved every word and emotion you have written this with! Hats off to such talent! ♡♡
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Thank you so much.I’ll visit your blog for sure
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Thanks dear!
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How did I ‘miss’ this? This is beautiful! So poignant and dreamy at the same time. I suddenly miss my mom a lot 😢
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Thank you.just call her
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We talk almost everyday 😁 still it can’t compare to the physical closeness. I miss that 😢
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I know that.I’m sorry for making you feel bad😢
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No! It was a welcome feeling 😊😊😊 thank you for that picture of motherhood. 😊
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Don’t worry.next time when you meet her you can give her one big hug.And one more hug from my side.😊
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I will, Doll. Gn 😘
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I like this.this made me smile.I didn’t like when you told me sweet the other day.gn
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Gotcha 😉
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That was amazing, Jeni. *tears*
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Thank you sonia
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I feel sorry for myself for not coming across this post before. You express so perfectly!
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You don’t have to.I know you were busy with your exams.I’m happy you liked it as this post is my favourite too.
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🙂
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Beautifully written. 😢
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Thanks hajira
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touching:)
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Thanks dear
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A very touching poem, Jeni!
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Thank you
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I can’t believe I missed reading this wonderful piece of writing here. It’s emotional in a beautiful way! You’re are amazing 💕
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Thank you sakshi. This one is my favorite too. I feel happy whenever I get likes or comments on this post. You made my day.
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Anytime dear! 😇
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Warm and Heart-wrenching.
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Thank you orange😊😊
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i re-read this .. sobbed through every word.
it was so very beautifully written..
love you!
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Love you moon
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Thank you for reading it again
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felt sad to read
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Good writing -a wonderful tribute to a special mom! There is forever a place for the orphan…
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